I decided to use the "share this" feature to see if any of my friends on facebook would maybe join the Gaming commitment bit(I have a lot of gamer friends).
The problem I have is that the text is a bit bland and awkward
This is posted on my wall. So there is no "personal" you. Why not rephrase this a bit where it's more like an announcement rather than a personal message? Also, why not bring in actual content?
Gaming - Area 51 - Stack Exchange area51.stackexchange.com
Check out this proposed Q&A site for passionate gamers from all platforms (computers and consoles). If it sounds interesting then you can "Commit" to the site so that you can be notified when it is created.