This may very well get closed as a duplicate. I've read Editing for broken english: Acceptable?, and I believe that my edits are OK, but I wanted some clarification. I want to make sure I'm not "abusing" my new found editing power.
I made significant changes to this question because the original was so poorly written in my opinion that it was getting downvotes, when I can see a legitimate question here that shouldn't be downvoted. I tried as hard to maintain the style of the original question as best as I could. In this specific case, did I do a good job? If so I know I can use similar style in the future.