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I think so.

Leaving around obsolete comments clutters the page, and these comments are no longer useful.

What might be a good practice, in case you're worried about the fact that "author's thanks is now dangling," you should flag that comment as "obsolete," because that comment no longer serves a purpose, either.

If you want to maintain a record of why certain edits were made, you can write that into the edit summary.