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Reword "and 18 or up" on election pages

One way to increase comprehension is to use simpler sentences. Instead of one long, convoluted sentence with multiple points, we can separate the criteria into at least two sentences. In the ...
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Reword "and 18 or up" on election pages

Rather than just rewording the problematic phrase, it would be better to reword the whole sentence. Normally, text in brackets should be a minor or obvious addition to the preceding text, or at least ...
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