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"It's unfriendly or unkind." doesn't look really separate from "It contains harassment, bigotry, or abuse.", but a superset of it, as it's true for both the latter case and the case of subtle put-downs. I would make the text read "It's mildly unfriendly or unkind." instead, which implies that there's no severe rudeness such as harassment, bigotry or abuse.

Another issue I have is the return of the "It's no longer needed." text. "not relevant", the previous version of this text, was way better, IMHO, so I suggest changing it back to "It's not relevantunnecessary.".

"It's unfriendly or unkind." doesn't look really separate from "It contains harassment, bigotry, or abuse.", but a superset of it, as it's true for both the latter case and the case of subtle put-downs. I would make the text read "It's mildly unfriendly or unkind." instead, which implies that there's no severe rudeness such as harassment, bigotry or abuse.

Another issue I have is the return of the "It's no longer needed." text. "not relevant", the previous version of this text, was way better, IMHO, so I suggest changing it back to "It's not relevant.".

"It's unfriendly or unkind." doesn't look really separate from "It contains harassment, bigotry, or abuse.", but a superset of it, as it's true for both the latter case and the case of subtle put-downs. I would make the text read "It's mildly unfriendly or unkind." instead, which implies that there's no severe rudeness such as harassment, bigotry or abuse.

Another issue I have is the return of the "It's no longer needed." text. I suggest changing it to "It's unnecessary.".

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"It's unfriendly or unkind." doesn't look really separate from "It contains harassment, bigotry, or abuse.", but a superset of it, as it's true for both the latter case and the case of subtle put-downs. I would make the text read "It's mildly unfriendly or unkind." instead, which implies that there's no severe rudeness such as harassment, bigotry or abuse.

Another issue I have is the return of the "It's no longer needed." text. "not relevant", the previous version of this text, was way better, IMHO, so I suggest changing it back to "It's not relevant.".