In my role as part of the proto-pro-tem council - we reviewed this, though I'm under the impression the version we saw already had the rough edges knocked off. Changes were suggested (and I recognise some of the wording as mine and others) and it went through the mod team. There's a few surprises, but none of them unpleasant.
Admittedly more eyeballs finds more bugs - but I do hope we don't wait a decade before reviewing the mod agreement again and. I feel like a good idea would be to have user concerns as shown here and elsewhere would find its way into future iterations of this.